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CELPIP Writing Task 2: a community garden or sports court

Support a neighbourhood proposal with concrete uses, maintenance considerations and a balanced comparison.

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Try the prompt

A neighbourhood has space for either a community garden or a small sports court. Choose one proposal and explain your reasons in 150–200 words.

  • Option A: a shared community garden.
  • Option B: a small sports court.
  • There is no supplied evidence about what most residents prefer.

Plan your approach

  1. State the choice and main benefit.
  2. Describe how residents could use the space.
  3. Address maintenance and the competing option.

Complete sample response

I would support a community garden because it could give residents a place to work together on a continuing project. Unlike an occasional event, caring for a garden would create regular reasons for neighbours to meet and share responsibilities. For example, experienced gardeners could show beginners how to prepare a small planting bed. Families could help label plants or organise a watering schedule, allowing people with different levels of experience to contribute. A few shared benches would also make the space useful to residents who prefer to visit rather than garden. I recognise that a sports court would offer valuable opportunities for exercise. However, I favour the garden because of the variety of quieter activities it could support. The proposal should include clear maintenance arrangements; otherwise, the space might become difficult to manage after the initial enthusiasm fades. Before proceeding, the neighbourhood should confirm that enough volunteers are willing to help throughout the growing season. With that commitment in place, I believe a garden would be a useful and welcoming addition to our shared space.

175 words, counting space-separated words including the greeting and sign-off.

Why these choices work

A response or interpretation to improve

A garden is better because everyone likes gardening. It will take care of itself and never cost anything.

Use a range of concrete contributions

Plant labels, watering and visiting illustrate participation without assuming all residents have the same interests or abilities.

Make support conditional on feasibility

The volunteer commitment is needed for ongoing maintenance. The response does not treat enthusiasm as proof that the project will succeed.

Vocabulary in context

commitment

A promise or willingness to give time and effort.

The garden needs a continuing commitment from volunteers.

Choose the right alternative: Interest means wanting to know or participate; commitment implies a stronger undertaking.

Usage note: Commitment to maintaining uses to plus an -ing form; avoid commitment for maintain.

Explore vocabulary, synonyms and idioms

Check your understanding

Choose an answer to see the evidence and an explanation for every option. These checks are not a proficiency score.

1. What condition does the writer place on proceeding?
All answers and explanations

What condition does the writer place on proceeding?

Answer: Enough volunteers must commit for the season

Evidence: confirm that enough volunteers are willing to help throughout the growing season.

  • All residents must garden: The response includes people who only visit.
  • Enough volunteers must commit for the season: Ongoing help is explicitly required.
  • Sports must be prohibited: The proposal does not ban sports.

Try a new situation

Choose between a neighbourhood repair workshop and a shared games room. Include a practical requirement that would help your chosen proposal succeed.

Use your own notes or voice recorder, then check your work:

  • Does the response explain rather than merely list benefits?
  • Have you included a practical concern?
  • Are claims about residents supported or framed as possibilities?
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